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" head...." BEN slowly opened his eyes. His vision was blurred. "Where am I...?"

"Good morning, hero...." A voice called. BEN was barely able to make out who was next to him.

"....Krys?" BEN tried to get up, but immediately fell. "Ow..."

"I wouldn't move if I were you. You're pretty beaten up."

"Krys...where are we...?"

"In some kind of holding cell at Zalgo knows where." Krys stood herself up. "Alright. We need to find a way out." BEN went to sit up, but Krys pushed him back down with her foot.

"Ow! What the hell??"

"Stay down. You can't even see straight, can you?"

"....Fine." BEN sighed. Krys did have a point. He was of no use in his condition.

"Hey!" Krys grinned. "There's a crack in this wall." Krys bent down and picked up something heavy. She hit the wall until it crumbled. "Heh. Idiots. They need to learn to fix broken stuff." She turned towards BEN. "Come on. We're getting out of here."

"Alright..." BEN was going to stand up, but felt himself being lifted. "Whoa!"

"Don't you worry, Benny. Just relax." Krys grinned, putting BEN over her shoulder. "Good thing you have a small body."



"Come on, Red. You know this place better than I do." Jeff and Red had buried Gold, and were now traveling through the portals. Red was keeping quiet, which annoyed Jeff. "Seriously, Red!" BRVR ran over and Jumped on Jeff's shoulder.

"Jeff. Can you hear me?" A crackly voice called.


"Good. The system works." BRVR's ears perked up. "It's okay, BRVR. It's just me."

"What's up, Masky?"

"Well, I thought that you guys would like to know that BEN is on the move. And he's with Krys."

"What?? Really??" Both Jeff and Red said at the same time.

"Yeah. It seems like Krys is carrying BEN." Masky chuckled. Jeff laughed, picturing BEN being carried. Red, who had formed a crush on Krys, growled.

"Where exactly are they?" Red asked, a slight hint of anger in his voice.

"'s hard to tell. It seems like an old castle. There are torches and broken stuff everywhere."

"Wait...." Red thought for a minute. "Old castles....lit by torches....Oh shit..." Red's eyes widened.

"What?" Jeff looked at Red.

"You don't mean Brennenurg, do you?!"
Next chapter! Sorry for all the cliffhangers, Bros. Things will be less cliffhangy now.

Now, Here;s the other side!
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Spiritmist16 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Death10281 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Student Writer
Please update for the next story I could not wait to read it
BloodyFang251 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
meeeh, chapter 9! shesh, im getting to into these stories, ur a really good writer btw
BloodyFang251 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
brennenburg? amnesia? PEEWDIEPIE! (sorry, that's just the first thing that came to me!)
never-ending-grin Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
When I saw the bottom I started screaming "NOOOO!! NOT AMNESIA!! ANYTHING BUT THAT!!!!" until my brother shouted up the f word and made me shut up. xD Anyways, this story is super captivating and makes you want more with each chapter- for that, I congratulate you~ x3
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

Yay >w< Thanks so much
never-ending-grin Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
No problem~!!!
gamergirl237 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
Fullmetal-ashley Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
omg another hetalia fan over here
mametchi1234 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A wittle birdy told me my baby is in this.

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