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"Ah....my head...." BEN slowly opened his eyes. His vision was blurred. "Where am I...?"

"Good morning, hero...." A voice called. BEN was barely able to make out who was next to him.

"....Krys?" BEN tried to get up, but immediately fell. "Ow..."

"I wouldn't move if I were you. You're pretty beaten up."

"Krys...where are we...?"

"In some kind of holding cell at Zalgo knows where." Krys stood herself up. "Alright. We need to find a way out." BEN went to sit up, but Krys pushed him back down with her foot.

"Ow! What the hell??"

"Stay down. You can't even see straight, can you?"

"....Fine." BEN sighed. Krys did have a point. He was of no use in his condition.

"Hey!" Krys grinned. "There's a crack in this wall." Krys bent down and picked up something heavy. She hit the wall until it crumbled. "Heh. Idiots. They need to learn to fix broken stuff." She turned towards BEN. "Come on. We're getting out of here."

"Alright..." BEN was going to stand up, but felt himself being lifted. "Whoa!"

"Don't you worry, Benny. Just relax." Krys grinned, putting BEN over her shoulder. "Good thing you have a small body."

"Hey!"

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"Come on, Red. You know this place better than I do." Jeff and Red had buried Gold, and were now traveling through the portals. Red was keeping quiet, which annoyed Jeff. "Seriously, Red!" BRVR ran over and Jumped on Jeff's shoulder.

"Jeff. Can you hear me?" A crackly voice called.

"Masky?"

"Good. The system works." BRVR's ears perked up. "It's okay, BRVR. It's just me."

"What's up, Masky?"

"Well, I thought that you guys would like to know that BEN is on the move. And he's with Krys."

"What?? Really??" Both Jeff and Red said at the same time.

"Yeah. It seems like Krys is carrying BEN." Masky chuckled. Jeff laughed, picturing BEN being carried. Red, who had formed a crush on Krys, growled.

"Where exactly are they?" Red asked, a slight hint of anger in his voice.

"Well....it's hard to tell. It seems like an old castle. There are torches and broken stuff everywhere."

"Wait...." Red thought for a minute. "Old castles....lit by torches....Oh shit..." Red's eyes widened.

"What?" Jeff looked at Red.

"You don't mean Brennenurg, do you?!"
Next chapter! Sorry for all the cliffhangers, Bros. Things will be less cliffhangy now.

Now, Here;s the other side!
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:iconspiritmist16:
Spiritmist16 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
LOST SILVER DIED!!?! No...
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:icondeath10281:
Death10281 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Student Writer
Please update for the next story I could not wait to read it
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BloodyFang251 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
meeeh, chapter 9! shesh, im getting to into these stories, ur a really good writer btw
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BloodyFang251 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
brennenburg? amnesia? PEEWDIEPIE! (sorry, that's just the first thing that came to me!)
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never-ending-grin Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
When I saw the bottom I started screaming "NOOOO!! NOT AMNESIA!! ANYTHING BUT THAT!!!!" until my brother shouted up the f word and made me shut up. xD Anyways, this story is super captivating and makes you want more with each chapter- for that, I congratulate you~ x3
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD

Yay >w< Thanks so much
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:iconnever-ending-grin:
never-ending-grin Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
No problem~!!!
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:icongamergirl237:
gamergirl237 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
NOOOO HIATUS!!! :nuu:
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:iconfullmetal-ashley:
Fullmetal-ashley Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
omg another hetalia fan over here
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:iconmametchi1234:
mametchi1234 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A wittle birdy told me my baby is in this.


ewe
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes. I love your Stephano creepypasta >w< And I am so sorry I didn't ask before using D':
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:iconmametchi1234:
mametchi1234 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Tis ok, my friend. OwO its just that i havent put anything up for his personality...
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, I'll try not to change him too much from how you imagine him ^w^
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:iconmametchi1234:
mametchi1234 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thankies bro~ first off, he aint as ... ehem ...'loud' XD but thanks for including him anyway, im so honored, you have no idea...
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musiclover95 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
When is part 9 coming out??? >.<
I can't wait for sooooo long
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:iconsweettwinks:
sweettwinks Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Brennen- What? What's that from? I feel so out of the loop! TwT
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's from a video game called Amnesia
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sweettwinks Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh. I never watched any of those videos by PewDiePie, or anyone else. I was too scared.
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SLenDErsUMmeRSevE Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU WHERE'S PART 9 IMMA DIE NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I need to write it XD
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SLenDErsUMmeRSevE Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hurry up, or I'll send Jack (Eyeless Jack) to eat your organs one by one until you finish the story. >w<
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
OwO EJ's coming to my house?? YAAAY!!
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:iconslendersummerseve:
SLenDErsUMmeRSevE Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
...he will eat you.
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
And I'll love it
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:iconslendersummerseve:
SLenDErsUMmeRSevE Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
...okaaaayyy....
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:iconirisdreamer1:
IrisDreamer1 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Student General Artist
moar please :3 this is an awesome story LOOOOVVVEEEEEE <3 <3
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:iconthelupinereturns:
TheLupineReturns Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
OH MY GOD. This is gonna be awesome if Brennenburg is involved! I'm so excited for more!
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
>w<
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AliceInDollLand Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
*Waiting for next chapter*
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:iconaphitaly:
APHItaly Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh no
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh yes
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:iconaphitaly:
APHItaly Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh god
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DevilEnderGirl Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
yep
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh Zalgo
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:iconaphitaly:
APHItaly Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Why
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Don't Know
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:iconaphitaly:
APHItaly Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ok
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:iconaphitaly:
APHItaly Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ve
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francesdaughter12 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist
yay BEN's okay ...Grrrrrrrrrr what did I say about cliffhangers

uh oh BEN you're in trouble now making moves on Krys (jk)

BRVR you're too cute

Masky ... I'm not even wanting to what you got brewing in your head
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yush >w< And I can't help writing them ^w^" sorry
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francesdaughter12 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist
One two splendy's coming for you
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Bring it, Splendor! :iconyaysplendormanplz:
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tthe13th Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist
*flips table back over* fuuu more cliff hanggers! >A<
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry, I can't help but writing them at the end of chapters ^w^" I don't know how else to end them
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tthe13th Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist
if i hadnt given the knife back to jeff i mightve thrown it at u again!
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*hides* TwT
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tthe13th Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist
2p: ^w^ but dont you worry bout it love, she gave it back an cant find her knife i may or ay not hae hid it

13th: U LIL SHIT! >[]<
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha >:3
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tthe13th Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist
2p: *twirls around* sorry~

13th: ugh 31st ur such a lil shit!!! where is it! where is my knife!!!
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
have fun searching~
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