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"Jeff!" BEN ran over as fast as he could. He tried to help Masky and Hoodie pry Jeff off of Jane's throat.

"Jeff! Let go now!!" Masky yelled, finally pulling him off of Jane. "Come on, BEN!" BEN nodded and helped Masky take Jeff to the cell, where they would put him so he could calm down.

"I'm gonna kill her! Let me go!! I'm gonna fucking kill her!!" Jeff hissed and screamed.

"Y-You bas-tard." Jane was laying on the floor, gasping for air. Hoodie helped her up and stayed next to her until she was okay.

Masky put Jeff in the cell. and walked away. Jeff slammed himself into the cell bars. "LET ME OUT!" He kept screaming and slamming himself against the bars.

"Jeff..." BEN stood there and watched him, knowing from experience that it wasn't smart to try and stop him while he was having a freakout.

"Let me out...." Jeff's voice softened, and he went from slamming himself against the bars to lightly punching them. "Please....let me out...." Jeff's voice cracked.

"Jeff..?" BEN walked into the cell and closed the door behind him. He knelt next to Jeff. "Jeff...?Are you alright...?"

"Let me out..." Jeff looked up. He had started crying. "Let me out. She deserves to die!" BEN, who always hated to see Jeff cry, wrapped his arms around Jeff and held him tight.

"It's okay, Jeff...It's okay." BEN felt himself tear up. It broke his heart to see someone like Jeff look so broken.

"She doesn't know..." Jeff cried into BEN's shoulder. "I hate her....She doesn't understand me....I hate her so much....I hate..." BEN sat there with Jeff in his arms, silently. Eventually, Jeff calmed down.

"Are you alright, Jeff...?"

"....."

"Jeff?" BEN looked at Jeff, and smiled. The killer had drifted off in his arms. BEN's face turned light red. BEN closed his eyes and spoke in his head.

'Liu....Your brother needs help. He feels so broken inside. Please. I know you don't know me, but please just listen to me. Give Jeff some kind of sign, saying you forgive him and are watching over him. You would make a very sad, very hurt killer very happy....'
Ch. 4. Man, you've really gotta feel bad for Jeff....
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Grellsama1313 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*sniff* ben... Jeff... *sits in the sob room*
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danielle14178 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
*Calmly imagines Jane doesn't exist until...* ZXCVBNM (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━
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CatGirlCuteness Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014
TABLE FLIP!!! XD
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InSaNeGamerLuna68 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
So much feels!!!!! Theres hatred sadness and a tinybit of happiness

Hatred for jane
Sadness for jeff
And the tinybit happiness for that cute jeff falling asleep in BEN's arms moment!!! 0^0
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Fluttershyisbest1932 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
BEN!! OUR ALL MIGHTY SAVIOR!!! AY MEUN!!!!!!!!!!

gotta love 'em..

*que stupid pokémon thème I just thought of*

fghcvkb….GOTTA LOVE 'EM AAAALLLLLL

CREE-PY PASTAAAA!!!!
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lonewolf200212 Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
aw poor Jeff. thank God for BEN.
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:iconstarrymochi:
StarryMochi Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
You make me fangirl. Its not fair.
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FlameingMoonlight Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
Oh, the feels man. The feels.
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:iconstorm-darchon:
Storm-Darchon Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
omg! BEN is so adorable i love they way you write him!
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LitleSlend Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh god thaaaaats soo cute and adorable and what not.
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:iconkyomihikaru:
KyomiHikaru Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awww....
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Zadremoboys Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Student General Artist
OHHHHHHHHHHH  poor jeff
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SpikeyMacksy Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
i laughed at the start cause it sounded like The Simpsons
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:iconxxmaxxitategamixx:
XxMaxxiTategamixX Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I am seriously crying now TT-TT
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Bbg100 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
Lets all take a moment to notice how diverse we each are, and how we all have come together in our love for this pairing.  Blaaaaaaah that song BEN sung is making me all thinky
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XioItalyPruX3 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why couldn't they have just LET Jeff kill Jane?!
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gothy-killer Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
dude...i'm crying...cause i'm reading this while listening to the song ben sung to jeff....
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Bbg100 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
Me toSad Hug - Updated 
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Blackbutlerlife Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
Jane...you bitch 🔥_🔥
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talashei Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student Artist
jane you twitch! y u so mean to poor jeffy?!
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD Twitch? I love that
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talashei Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Student Artist
random word iz random!
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unknownwolf1996 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
When is the next chapter?
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The next is already out
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:iconunknownwolf1996:
unknownwolf1996 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
*facepalm*
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gamergirl237 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
Jeff!! :nuu:
Please finish...:iconcryforeverplz:
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JeffTheKillerIsking Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
sad i hate you jane look what you did to poor jeff
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CreepersRcute Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
This is sadder the 2nd time around TT.TT :,) i love reading this
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MissPyroNeko Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
dear gogg that ending!! I cant stop the tears!! :iconlazycryplz:
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ninjagogirl173 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
:,(. poor jeff :,(.
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NuttyXx3 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
:'c
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YuriYaoiFANGURL Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcryforeverplz: :iconflailingplz: :iconcryingderpplz:

Poor Jeff
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Prucanon Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
.. *-*
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wolfgirlspiritsolf Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aww....
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MikaSniper Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I gotta see the next one
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irmightynoob Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
I dont feel bad for jeff im a heartless
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skylarluna Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
:'( .awww Jeff dont cry you're going to make me cry
*hugs Jeff and sniffles*
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KisameFanFromHell Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
This is such a emotional storry. I hope to read more.
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ProMeowMeow Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
right in the feels I didn't know I had :iconcutecryplz:
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fladrefollower Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
FEELS ATTACK!!!!!!!....in a good way. :3
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Coyote-Girl737 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
please continue
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I will ^w^
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Coyote-Girl737 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
:)
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jeffthekiller46 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i feel bad for jeff :'(
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SnappSoup Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This makes me have more hatred than ever for Jane |D
but are you gonna continue this story? You're a very good writer c:
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ^w^ I will. I'm trying to get all of my old stories (like this one) finished, so it may take a while to upload some from this story
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SnappSoup Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's fine :3 I just can't wait to read it, these stories just
they're so filled with FEELS ;w;
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like feels ;w;
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SLenDErsUMmeRSevE Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
NUUUUU.... POOR JEFFY!! :iconcriesplz:
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
T_T
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