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Jack bounced up the stairs, a tray with two plates of food in his hands. He was bringing Jeff and BEN their dinner. Jack placed the tray on a table and knocked on the door. Not hearing an answer, he walked in. Jack took two steps in and stopped. A huge smile formed behind his mask, seeing Jeff asleep with BEN in his arms. If he could speak, Jack would be congratulating the two on their love. Since he couldn't, he just jumped up and down for joy. Jack turned and took the tray inside and placed it on a table. Giving one last smile, Jack turned and walked out.

"They eating?" Masky walked over and looked in as Jack closed the door. Masky grinned and snickered. Soon, he was laughing. 'Oh my Zalgo!! They really ARE like that! Hah!!" He looked over at Jack, and froze. "Eh...Jack?"

Jack let out a very loud, very high pitched hissing noise. The noise caused Masky to almost fall over.

"Damn it, Jack! I'm sorry, Okay?!" He said, covering his ears. Jack headed for the stairs, and pulled Masky along with him. He was not pleased. "H-hey! Jack! Whoa, wait!" Masky complained, as Jack pulled him down the stairs.

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"I can't take this..." Jane said, her voice shaky. She was in a 'special room' that The Observer had set up for her. The room was completely dark, covered by shadows. Every time she said something cruel or threatening, shadows would reach out and tie her to the roof. When Jane was told that she'd be leaving for some 'reforming', she never expected this. And she thought Masky and Hoodie were twisted! "Let me out, dammit!" Jane shouted. "I'll kill you all!" As soon as she said those words, she regretted it. Jane shrieked as shadows crawled out of the floor and tied her down.

"Please...Help me..." She whispered as she began to cry.

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BEN opened his eyes and looked over at Jeff. He smiled and sat up. "Oh?" BEN shook Jeff. "Hey, Jeff. Food's here."

Jeff yawned. "Awesome." He smiled and stretched his arms. The two quickly ate their dinner and put the dishes on a shelf. BEN stood up and went to his computer. "Want to watch a movie?" After no answer, BEN looked over with a worried expression. "Jeff? What's wrong?"

"I don't know." He looked down and sighed. "i just have a feeling......"

"Jane again?"

"....Yeah." He looked up. "I think something may be happening to her." Jeff said, a nervous tone in his voice. BEN smiled and jumped onto the bed, curling up next to Jeff.

"It's alright. Jane's a hard-ass. She'll be fine." BEN closed his eyes.

"....I have to get her out of there, BEN." Jeff finally said after a while. BEN's eys shot open.

"What?! After what she's done to you?!"

"I know, I know. It's crazy. But I can't shake this feeling I have. It's like something's yelling at me to go help her." He put his hands on his head. "It's driving me insane!"

"It's your sanity, Jeff. The good side of you."

"I have a good side?" Jeff questioned, confused. BEN chuckled.

"Of course you do. And...you need to follow it." Jeff looked down at BEN.

"So, you're fine with me going?"

"Yes, but..." BEN wrapped his arms around Jeff. "Tonight you stay here. With me. Deal?"

"Deal."
Ch. 7! I have a policy to get at least two chapters uploaded a day, sick or not! :heart: And I took some medicine and a nap, so I'll be writing for a while!

That's right, Bros. I have some sympathy for Jane for some reason. :iconeheheplz:
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jennyorlean Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
miku (fuck youz) 
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the-luna Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014
thank you
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jennyorlean Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Np :3
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superroxyfoxy42 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Okay?
okaykaomoji set 1 7/19 
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FyRose Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey, I looked at this again and realized that Eyeless Jack is both a supporter and protector of SleepyGameShipping. Like, it appears that Masky was about to make fun of their love, and Jack letting out a hiss of anger for doing that is mirroring the same way a protector will yell at a bully to back off, minus the hissing, or else face the consequences.
Seeing the way he is overprotective of SleepyGame, I wonder what would happen if a hater comes along and Eyeless Jack happens to be standing right behind them...........

I'm sure the results will be.......interesting.
That's why I love this chapter, I love analyzing it and Eyeless Jack is the best because he luvs "this kyute couple~".Neko Emoji-14 (Cry) [V1] 
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ThePsychoYandere Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hmmm i if i were jeff i'd be like
"should i be worrying about her? hmmmmm she's kinda helpless now.... MLEH. whateves.. she can handle it"
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FyRose Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awww Jack! You ship them! Jumping up and down is the action of a fangirl/boy, so Jack is a fanboy!!!! :D
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Jack: :iconyushplz:
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FyRose Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Someone get Jack in a fanboy outfit! ( If I said fangirl, they will put him in a dress/skirt) :O :)
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KittenAddiction698 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
Now I'm imagining Jack in a mini skirt <__>
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FyRose Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
here comes the fanart~
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KittenAddiction698 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014
Oh god... >:3
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:iconfyrose:
FyRose Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah.... Jack in a mini-skirt jumping up and down over the"cutest couple in the world"~
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KittenAddiction698 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014
Jack: Mah OTP .3.*takes pic of BEN and Jeff and prints on a shirt*
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sukothedark Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I hate Jane and don't even care about her so I say "why you save Jane?"
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LitleSlend Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Jeffs like ''I HAVE A GOOD SIDE ಠ_ಠ''
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KyomiHikaru Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD "I have a good side?"
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xXIlluminatedOfWCXx Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
:iconeheheplz:
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:iconxioitalyprux3:
XioItalyPruX3 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yaoi!!! I don't know what to feel for Jane anymore!
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talashei Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student Artist
cant wait for teh yaoi!
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Januaryindia Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
I would kill jane....not just tie her down...
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XxMaxxiTategamixX Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love you random person who hates Jane >w< xDDD
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BJthekiller Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
fuck Jane
i wish i eas the observer but had my looks and brain hahaha
make Jane feell she is in hell!!!
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Psycho-chan13 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
I don't give a fuck about Jane. On with the yaoi boys! Just forget about that asshole. :dummy:
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:iconziedahottie116:
ZieDaHottie116 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I am now your best friend!!! *highfive*
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:iconlauradrakkyn:
Lauradrakkyn Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
GROUPHUG OF THE YAOI LOVERS AND JANE HATERS!!!!!!!
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:iconxioitalyprux3:
XioItalyPruX3 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Me too! Please?
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:iconpsycho-chan13:
Psycho-chan13 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
Oh yeah. I just made a fellow fangirl friend. Fuck yesh. :highfive:
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hetastickers Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
YAOI LOVE
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AngelXBEN Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Yush to that!
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hetastickers Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
:) luv da pic
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AngelXBEN Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Thx!! ^3^
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hetastickers Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
BEN
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ninjagogirl173 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
WTH?!! why am I feeling bad for Jane!!??? what is happening to me?!!
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danielle14178 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
yeah....i have been sent to be reformed.....took the observer 4 monthes to crack me
i just kept screaming and i think it just got onto his bad side after 4 monthes becouse he did not
let me go of being good....hehehhehe.....i was listening to them behind the door he whould not stop
telling zalgo to let me go...yep i said ZALGO.
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creepyfanfcition Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like what you right, keep it going its really good!
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fladrefollower Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
You can totes tell that it is Jeff's little bro nagging him, how cute. <3
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xXNetherDemonXx Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
Yay there gunna save Jane >w< Great story! But the only thing that bothered me was the whole good side T^T their insane killers. They don't have good sides and if they do they definitely don't follow it or tell others to follow it. But other than that BEST. CREEPYPASTA. PAIRING. FANFIC. EVER. :3
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I felt that mindless killing wouldn't get very far ^w^" Thanks a bunch >w<
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BlizzardHaleAlpha Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013   Artist
>.< suffer jane! SUFFER!...untill jeff comes to get you...
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Purplespectrum98 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
'Oh mah Zagalo' XD lolwut?
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TrueOkamiAmaterasu Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Student Writer
Zalgo is the god of the creepypastas, basically it's their way of saying oh my god
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD It's a pun
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orginization96 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student General Artist
=_= i say let the bitch suffer....
so ya evedently jeff is a better person than i am
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD Sufferrrrr!!!!!
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orginization96 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student General Artist
YES
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tthe13th Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icontableflipplz: nuuuuu
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconkekekeplz:
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconevilfaceplz:
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