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Jack made the same strange hissing noise that he always did when he was furious, but it sounded a lot more aggressive this time.

"What the....What the hell are you?!" Persolus backed away, terrified.

"'What' am I?" Jack walked closer. "That's not very nice....." He grinned. "Although, I'm not sure how to answer that, i guess you can call me...a beast!" Jack ran at Persolus and kicked him against the wall. Jack was right when he said that he didn't need a weapon. He was a weapon.

"S-Stop!" Persolus picked up the broken pipe that Jack had bitten and slashed Jack with it, leaving a huge gash in the boy's face.

"Aah!" Jack fell back, holding his face. As he tried to wipe the blood out of his 'eyes', Persolus took the opportunity and quickly stood. He ran over and stepped on Jack's chest. Jack screamed. Not in his head, but a true scream of pain. He couldn't breathe. Persolus was stepping on him way too hard.

"A beast, huh? Hah! I've seen cats scarier than you." Persolus laughed. Jack tried to push the man;s foot off of his chest, but found that it was getting hard to move.

"I....I'm sorry, my friends...." Jack said, suddenly speaking. "It looks like I won't be making it out of here...." Persolus smirked.

"Funny. You finally get your voice, and you can't use it." Once Jack stopped moving, Persolus took his foot off of the boy's chest. "Pity. You would have made an excellent Collective member..." Persolus turned. He was going towards the exit, when he suddenly felt an intense pain in his leg. He looked down to find that Jack had bitten his ankle. The boy's teeth went straight through the bone. Persolus screamed and fell. "How?!" He cried out.

"You were two seconds too early. Any longer, and I would have been dead." Jack released Persolus's ankle and grinned. Persolus tried to crawl away, but Jack grabbed his broken ankle and pulled him back. "Nope. You're not going anywhere. This....is where it ends for you." Jack pulled Persolus and crawled towards him, unable to stand. Persolus let out one last shriek as Jack sunk his teeth through the man's throat. "Well, there's no point in leaving some perfectly good organs." Jack grinned. After devouring the dead Persolus's organs, Jack crawled over to his mask and put it on. Jack just laid there, completely still. ".....There's not much I can do in this condition." Jack chuckled. "I'll wait here for them. May Zalgo guide you to safety, my friends."
Ch. 14!

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:iconbunnygaming:
BunnyGaming Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015
WOO GO JACK
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:iconsuperroxyfoxy42:
superroxyfoxy42 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I demand...... I mean may I paw ease have some moar...........................
SENPAI?!?!?!Bear Emoji-27 (Running or Following) [V2] 
Also I want a cookieEmoticon: Cookie... 
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:iconpenguinofdoomib:
penguinofdoomib Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Moar? :(
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:iconstabbyandmimzay:
StabbyAndMimzay Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014
YAY! good job jack!! Lovely Shoujo Emoji (Huggy Hug) [V2] 
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:iconthepsychoyandere:
ThePsychoYandere Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
if only i can live without my organs.... i'd give them to jack.. but still
i need my stomach to eat..
i love food
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:iconben-drowneds-girl:
BEN-Drowneds-Girl Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Bad ass Jack XD
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:iconfaeriemayden:
FaerieMayden Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pfft, everyone is confessing to Jack below here. xD I think they're scared. Not even 'God' can save you now. >:3
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sukothedark Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist

Jack I love you and will give you my organs. If you want them take them if not I might cry. I have loved for years now. No! For centuries. If you take my organs now and eat them one by one. I will know what it means to have an eternal love.



I love this story! <3

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:icontizzy101:
Tizzy101 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

Jack... might I just say you are one Perfect guy and I love you! you are an amazing person and  would like to give you my kidneys and my heart because it it worthless if it isn't for you and so I will die but you will live on and I will be apart of you *smiles sweetly* *cuts out kidneys and cuts a whole where her heart should be* please say you will take care of my heart *takes adrenalin 15 shots* *cuts out heart and gives it all to Jack* well now I gota wait for the shots to where off... (1 day later) anytime now... (3 weeks later) oh come on?!!! where the hell is my tragic and loving death?!!?!?!!? (1 year later) OK THIS IS FUCKING REDICULIOUS! I SHOULD BE DEAD NOW!!!!!

Slendy: u realize your immortal right? after you gave you heart to Jack you became one of us...

 

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK well that killed the story... 

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:iconkittycatlover724:
kittycatlover724 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
XDD OH YEA!!!!
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:icontizzy101:
Tizzy101 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:D MY STORY IS DEAD AND YOUR HAPPY!?!?!?!
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:iconkittycatlover724:
kittycatlover724 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
NO!!1 IT MADE ME SMILE ON A SAD DAY!
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:icontizzy101:
Tizzy101 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
.. ............................... well.... OK THEN :D
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:iconkittycatlover724:
kittycatlover724 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
yep :3 Yui Hirasawa (Castanets Dance) [V1] Spazattackplz Slamheadplz 
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:icontizzy101:
Tizzy101 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
FREE!!! I LOVE FREE!!!!
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:iconkittycatlover724:
kittycatlover724 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
FFFF----FFFFRREEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! BD
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:iconneon-painter:
Neon-Painter Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Student General Artist
You did good,Jack.You did good.
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:icondeath10281:
Death10281 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student Writer
THAT WAS F$%#@ COOLYay omgnoes Caught by Suprise Emoticon 
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:iconangelxben:
AngelXBEN Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
I promised Jack that the momen I died, If my kidneys were still in tact, he could have them. ^~^
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:iconxioitalyprux3:
XioItalyPruX3 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Fudge yeah Jack!
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:icontalashei:
talashei Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student Artist
:D
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:icongaffiecat16:
Gaffiecat16 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
F*ck yeah Jack! You sure showed him! *does victory dance in celebration*
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:iconelisemarine:
Elisemarine Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I didnt really care too much about Jack until I read this...
Jack,you beast,you sexy beast,come here :D
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:iconsupersonicbrosx:
SuperSonicBrosX Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013
u sure u want him
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:iconelisemarine:
Elisemarine Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes,even if he takes my kidneys ^^)
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:iconziedahottie116:
ZieDaHottie116 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Can I just say one thing to Jack??? I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! YOU ARE BEASTIE!!! *hugs tightly*
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconeyelessjackplz::iconsaysplz::iconiloveyoutooplz:
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:iconpsycho-chan13:
Psycho-chan13 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
Jack... you are one badass motherfucker. I salute you! :salute:
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:iconziedahottie116:
ZieDaHottie116 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I LOVE JACK NOW!!!
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:iconpsycho-chan13:
Psycho-chan13 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
Me too, Chick. Me too. :dalove:
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:iconghiralinklove:
ghiralinklove Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
jack is a BADASS!
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:iconninjagogirl173:
ninjagogirl173 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
JACK IS TOTAL BADASS!!!!!
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's why I love him
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:iconninjagogirl173:
ninjagogirl173 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
IKR!!!
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:iconreithekiller:
ReiTheKiller Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*nods* A Beasttt... :D..... i thought he was some satanic embodiment??
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:iconcreepyjenny:
creepyJenny Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
heh heh JACK YOU AWESOME SON OF A B*TCH
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:iconcreepyfanfcition:
creepyfanfcition Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
GO JACK!
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:iconjeffthekiller46:
jeffthekiller46 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
in my mind jack was awesome now, he's BADASS!!!
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconeyelessjackplz::iconsaysplz::iconikilleditplz:
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:iconjeffthekiller46:
jeffthekiller46 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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:iconslendersummerseve:
SLenDErsUMmeRSevE Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
JACK IS ONE BADASS MOTHERFUCKER :iconeyelessjackplz:
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Jack: damn right I am
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:iconslendersummerseve:
SLenDErsUMmeRSevE Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, yes you are :iconikilleditplz:
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:iconblizzardhalealpha:
BlizzardHaleAlpha Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013   Artist
-.- never let organs go to waste jack
XD EPICNESS!!!
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:iconorginization96:
orginization96 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student General Artist
*noming a cupcake me and jack backed* yum organ cupcakes
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD I think you and Pinkie Pie would be friends
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:iconorginization96:
orginization96 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student General Artist
yes we are ^_^, she's the one that tought me how to bake.
me pinkie, insane twilight, Buthershy, Rarity, and Rainbow dash are all the best of friends. me and AJ don't get along to well
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:iconstarfighter101:
starfighter101 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
AWESOME!!
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
>w< Danke
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:iconhorrordragon339:
Horrordragon339 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Jack is a BADASS
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