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Jack made the same strange hissing noise that he always did when he was furious, but it sounded a lot more aggressive this time.

"What the....What the hell are you?!" Persolus backed away, terrified.

"'What' am I?" Jack walked closer. "That's not very nice....." He grinned. "Although, I'm not sure how to answer that, i guess you can call me...a beast!" Jack ran at Persolus and kicked him against the wall. Jack was right when he said that he didn't need a weapon. He was a weapon.

"S-Stop!" Persolus picked up the broken pipe that Jack had bitten and slashed Jack with it, leaving a huge gash in the boy's face.

"Aah!" Jack fell back, holding his face. As he tried to wipe the blood out of his 'eyes', Persolus took the opportunity and quickly stood. He ran over and stepped on Jack's chest. Jack screamed. Not in his head, but a true scream of pain. He couldn't breathe. Persolus was stepping on him way too hard.

"A beast, huh? Hah! I've seen cats scarier than you." Persolus laughed. Jack tried to push the man;s foot off of his chest, but found that it was getting hard to move.

"I....I'm sorry, my friends...." Jack said, suddenly speaking. "It looks like I won't be making it out of here...." Persolus smirked.

"Funny. You finally get your voice, and you can't use it." Once Jack stopped moving, Persolus took his foot off of the boy's chest. "Pity. You would have made an excellent Collective member..." Persolus turned. He was going towards the exit, when he suddenly felt an intense pain in his leg. He looked down to find that Jack had bitten his ankle. The boy's teeth went straight through the bone. Persolus screamed and fell. "How?!" He cried out.

"You were two seconds too early. Any longer, and I would have been dead." Jack released Persolus's ankle and grinned. Persolus tried to crawl away, but Jack grabbed his broken ankle and pulled him back. "Nope. You're not going anywhere. where it ends for you." Jack pulled Persolus and crawled towards him, unable to stand. Persolus let out one last shriek as Jack sunk his teeth through the man's throat. "Well, there's no point in leaving some perfectly good organs." Jack grinned. After devouring the dead Persolus's organs, Jack crawled over to his mask and put it on. Jack just laid there, completely still. ".....There's not much I can do in this condition." Jack chuckled. "I'll wait here for them. May Zalgo guide you to safety, my friends."
Ch. 14!

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superroxyfoxy42 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I demand...... I mean may I paw ease have some moar...........................
SENPAI?!?!?!Bear Emoji-27 (Running or Following) [V2] 
Also I want a cookieEmoticon: Cookie... 
penguinofdoomib Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Moar? :(
StabbyAndMimzay Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014
YAY! good job jack!! Lovely Shoujo Emoji (Huggy Hug) [V2] 
ThePsychoYandere Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
if only i can live without my organs.... i'd give them to jack.. but still
i need my stomach to eat..
i love food
BEN-Drowneds-Girl Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Bad ass Jack XD
FaerieMayden Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pfft, everyone is confessing to Jack below here. xD I think they're scared. Not even 'God' can save you now. >:3
sukothedark Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist

Jack I love you and will give you my organs. If you want them take them if not I might cry. I have loved for years now. No! For centuries. If you take my organs now and eat them one by one. I will know what it means to have an eternal love.

I love this story! <3

Tizzy101 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

Jack... might I just say you are one Perfect guy and I love you! you are an amazing person and  would like to give you my kidneys and my heart because it it worthless if it isn't for you and so I will die but you will live on and I will be apart of you *smiles sweetly* *cuts out kidneys and cuts a whole where her heart should be* please say you will take care of my heart *takes adrenalin 15 shots* *cuts out heart and gives it all to Jack* well now I gota wait for the shots to where off... (1 day later) anytime now... (3 weeks later) oh come on?!!! where the hell is my tragic and loving death?!!?!?!!? (1 year later) OK THIS IS FUCKING REDICULIOUS! I SHOULD BE DEAD NOW!!!!!

Slendy: u realize your immortal right? after you gave you heart to Jack you became one of us...



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