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"Hurry, hurry! This way!" Firebrand led them through the buildings. After a while, Jack stopped. Masky looked over at him.

"Something wrong, Jack?" Jack looked around.

"He senses something." Hoodie said. "I can, too." Firebrand froze.

"Oh no...Jack, run!!" Shadows wrapped around Jack and pulled him through the floor.

"Jack!!" BEN yelled. He tried to go after Jack, put was pulled through the wall.

"Damn it! Run!" Firebrand yelled. He ran down the hall, Hoodie following. As Masky went to follow, Shadows formed a wall to keep him in place.

"Masky!!" Hoodie yelled and turned to help his friend. Firebrand continued to run. He ran around the corner, and was greeted by The Observer.

"Oh, Firebrand." Observer growled. "You always did make a mess of things."

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Jane walked out of her cell. She had Jeff on her back, and was struggling to walk. "How is someone so skinny so heavy?" She complained. Jane sighed. Jeff was unconscious and still bleeding, but he was still breathing. "Don't you die on me, Jeff. I still want to be the one that ends you." She grinned, then stopped. "This is no time to be joking about this, Jane....You've got to get Jeff out of here....." Jane passed the monitors, and took a look. "Gah!" She growled. "Those idiots! What are they doing here?!"

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"Ah.....My head...." Jack said to himself. He sat up and looked around. "Where am I?" Jack stood and walked around the dark room. He felt around for an exit, but couldn't find one.

"So. You're awake."

"...!!!" Jack turned around. He backed away. "Who the hell....?!"

"'Who the hell' indeed." A figure climbed out of the shadows.

"Wait...you can hear my thoughts??" Now Jack was beginning to get scared. "Who the hell are you??" The figure grinned.

"Yes I can, Jack. My name is Persolus. And it's time for you to die."
Ch.12!

Things are going insane!

And Jane has a heart after all!
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:iconjeffythekiller123:
Jeffythekiller123 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014   Traditional Artist
No. No! JEFF!!! DON'T YOU DIE ON ME MISTER!!
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:iconstarrymochi:
StarryMochi Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
NO... JACK...NO. NO NO NO. JACK, YOU AIN'T GONNA DIE, MAN. NO. 
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:iconthepsychoyandere:
ThePsychoYandere Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
even if jane had a heart... i still don't kinda like her
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:iconstabbyandmimzay:
StabbyAndMimzay Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014
i still hate her! no offense but really :hitwithbat: i hate herrrrrrrrrrr
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:iconthepsychoyandere:
ThePsychoYandere Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
None taken.... She's just like... Ughhhh
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:iconstabbyandmimzay:
StabbyAndMimzay Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
i know
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:iconkittycatlover724:
kittycatlover724 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
MINI-SLENDER!!! GAH!!! JANE DRAG JEFF IF HE'S TOO HEAVY FOR GOD'S SAKE!!
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:iconjeffxben1234:
JeffxBen1234 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
Don't die on me Jack!
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:iconneon-painter:
Neon-Painter Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Student General Artist
I was listening to I Don't Wanna Die while reading this....
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:iconxxmaxxitategamixx:
XxMaxxiTategamixX Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Same lol xD
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:iconneon-painter:
Neon-Painter Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Student General Artist
XD
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:iconr41n80w-81tch:
R41N80W-81TCH Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No. NO. NOOOOO. JACK WILL NOT DIE!
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:iconflameingmoonlight:
FlameingMoonlight Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
Jack will not die, he'll wait here for you
He feels alive, when you're beside him
Jack will not die, he'll wait here for you
In his time of dying

Sorry, that was necessary
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:iconr41n80w-81tch:
R41N80W-81TCH Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
Oh my Gog
That's just.... XD
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:iconenemom:
Enemom Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Poor firebrand, being ruined by a horrible storyline. I feel dory for him.
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:iconxioitalyprux3:
XioItalyPruX3 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Jack NROOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icontalashei:
talashei Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student Artist
NOES!!!!!!
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:icongaffiecat16:
Gaffiecat16 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
NO JACK!!!
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:iconziedahottie116:
ZieDaHottie116 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
NO!!!! NOT JACK!!!!
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeees! jack! OwO
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:iconturret6547:
turret6547 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DON'T YOU DARE KILL BEN!!!! I WILL HURT YOU!!!!
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:iconninjagogirl173:
ninjagogirl173 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
O•O no not jack!!!!!!
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:iconreithekiller:
ReiTheKiller Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm like dying here, estatic on no sleep for 3 days and monster, and godddddddd. this... is just epic.... but i'm laughing too much!! whats going onnnn! ima stahp talking now... ._.
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:iconxx-deadkitty-xx:
xX-Deadkitty-Xx Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Student General Artist
NUUUUU JJJAAAACCCCKKKK!!!!!
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:iconfladrefollower:
fladrefollower Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
Shit's gettn' serious ALL up in here. Soooo, what is Jack's story?
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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:iconfladrefollower:
fladrefollower Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
That really did clear some things up, thanks!
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:iconblizzardhalealpha:
BlizzardHaleAlpha Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013   Artist
NO! NONONONONONONO! JACK WILL NOT DIE!!!!
I WONT ALOW IT!!!
DX
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:iconkewlkatcutie:
KewlKatCutie Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i still hate jane.. even if ur helping jeffy
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Jane: |:<
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:iconkewlkatcutie:
KewlKatCutie Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
x3
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:iconorginization96:
orginization96 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student General Artist
O_O jane.....actually.......helping.......jeffy...... WHAT THE FUCK HAS THIS WORLD COME 2!!!!!!
lol jk *hugs jane* your a bitch but a good bitch for helping my jeffy
Jane: *bitch slaps* stfu i still hate him
*ignores slap* ^_^
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD Wow, Jane
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:iconorginization96:
orginization96 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student General Artist
X3 lolz
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:icontthe13th:
tthe13th Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconigiveupplz: fine jane can live.... for now >.>

:iconhellnoplz: not jack!!!!!!!!! i want jane dead if jack dies... I SWARE!!!! >[]<
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconeyelessjackplz::iconsaysplz: >w<
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:icontthe13th:
tthe13th Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconfuuplz:
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:icondragon-eve-love:
Dragon-Eve-Love Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
NOT JACK!!! that observer is really beginning to piss me off.
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:iconashambbelle2:
ashambbelle2 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist
nooo jack!!!
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Jack is in trouble >w<
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:iconashambbelle2:
ashambbelle2 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist
nooooooooooooo so saddddd jack my friend....my drug dealer dont get hurt!!!! >.< XD
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
o.o
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:iconashambbelle2:
ashambbelle2 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist
XD
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:iconstarfighter101:
starfighter101 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
Jeff can't die! Slenderman won't allow it. . . at least i hope he won't
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:iconaliceindollland:
AliceInDollLand Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconmoarplz: :iconmoarplz: :iconmoarplz: :iconmoarplz: :iconmoarplz:
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconokayplz::iconokayplz::iconokayplz::iconokayplz::iconokayplz:
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:iconaliceindollland:
AliceInDollLand Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
LOL! :iconpervyplz:
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconpervjeffthekillerplz:
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:iconaliceindollland:
AliceInDollLand Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
LOL. :iconpervygoldplz:
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:iconsenpai12341:
Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconpervysilverplz:
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