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"Ready to go?" Masky looked at the group. Everyone had something to fight with. Masky had a pipe, BEN had his sword, Hoodie had a knife. Jack had convinced them that he didn't need a weapon.

"Hell yeah." BEN grinned. "Let's go help those idiots!" The three walked through the door to The Collective's base. Masky shuddered.

"You three are lucky you aren't human...All I can feel is darkness..." Masky looked around, nervous. Hoodie placed a hand on his partner's shoulder.

"Don't worry, Masky." He reassured him.

"Masky?? Hoodie??" A voice called. Shadows formed as Firebrand slipped through the wall.

"Firebrand...." Masky backed up. Hoodie walked towards him.

"Sorry about Masky. He-."

"I know. He can't get touched by others like us, or he will take his body back." Firebrand grabbed Hoodie's arm. "Come on! Observer's gonna kill him! We have to hurry!"

"Calm down, Firebrand." Masky walked towards them, careful to not be touched. "Who is Observer going to kill?"

"Jeff!!"

"What?!" BEN ran over, panicked. "No no no no!! We have to go help him!" BEN went to run ahead, but was held back by Jack. "Let me go! I have to help Jeff!!"

"Calm down, BEN!" Masky tried to calm him. He turned to Firebrand. "Alright, Firebrand. Take us to where they are."

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Jeff hit the ground, screaming in pain. His arm was somehow broken in two places now, and The Observer never made a move. Observer cackled and picked up Jeff by his head.

"Aww. Too bad" Observer grinned. "Game over." He tightened his grip. Blood began to drip from Jeff's mouth. Jane's eyes widened.

"Jeff...."

"And you, little girl. You're next." Observer cackled with delight. "Hmm? Hold on." He dropped Jeff and turned to the door. "Stay here." He walked out.

"Jeff!" Jane ran over to him. "Jeff! Jeff, answer me!" She shook and called the killer, with no response. "Jeff!" She pulled him over and lay his head on her lap. "Jeff.....I'm so sorry....This is my fault.....I always wanted you to die, but not like this." She sobbed.

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The Observer viewed the monitors, which showed every area of the building. He grinned. "So they think that they can just sneak their way into here? Oh my." Observer cackled, and pressed four buttons. "Persolus, Cursor, Mr. Scars, Deadhead. I have a job for the four of you."
Ch. 11

Observer, you bastard!!

Shit is going down
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StarryMochi Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
"I always wanted you to die, but not like this." Wow, I think this is going to be the kindest words spoken by Jane XD
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Alyssa23459 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Jane: "I always wanted you to die but not like this. "
You: "Wow, I think this is going to be the kindest words spoken by Jane XD. "
Jane: "I WANTED TO KILL YOU MYSELF!" *Sobs*
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StarryMochi Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2015
Holy crap this comment was so old wowowowow
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golden138 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
"*yells over my shoulder* Yo, kitten! Wanna help me murder someone?"
" *from somewhere in the background* Depends, what did they do?"
"They hurt Jeff!"
"....... Tell me where to hide the body."

This is a serious conversation me and my friend had after i got done reading this chapter.

Oh, and by the way...
You have earned a new stalker Senpai~
No, seriously.
I love your work.
Keep it up.
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD niice


A stalker fir me? owo thank you?
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Cgphilli Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
Me: NOOOOOO JEFF DONT FREAKING DIE!!!!!!!!!!!
My mom: *opens my bedroom door* what?
Me: uh...nothing
My mom: i have a feeling i don't wanna know -.-
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UnlimitedPies Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Oh god shit just hit the fan.
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xXIlluminatedOfWCXx Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
JEFFY DUN DIEEEEE
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XioItalyPruX3 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No Jeff! Don't die on me and BEN!!!!!!
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JeffxBen1234 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
Omg I'm like Crying Here!! Oh my God ... JEFF!
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ZieDaHottie116 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
IM CRYING AGAIN!!!
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
nuuuuuu! >.<
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Tallest-Nightmare Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OH NOOOO!!!!!!!
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fladrefollower Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
So. Many. Feels. Especially for BEN. I love BEN. w
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ladyrainicorn19 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
Yes I know I should've asked this on the first chapter but what does Jeff's brother look like?(if he looks like Jeff now please just tell me and don't show ant picture)
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, there's no true look for him. But the way I see him, he's a bit shorter than jeff and has brown hair and green eyes
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ladyrainicorn19 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
Ok and thank you I can only look at cirten pictures of Jeff's face so that's why I asked you
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CelticSpirit12 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I was okay with Jeff's arm being broken, but head trauma, or even death?

Oh no he didn't.

Gurl, hold my gold rings. Some serious shit's about to go down.
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh shit XD
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gamergirl237 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
Guuuuuuurl, hold ma puddle.
It's about to go down.
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BlizzardHaleAlpha Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013   Artist
*imagine stabbing observer multiple times in the head with jeffs knife*
.......:3
observer+me killing him= a happy jeff the killer fangirl
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orginization96 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student General Artist
*pulls out epiclyy huge shotgun* ok that's it vea's goin on a massacre montage, nobody hurts my jeffy and lives to tell about it
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah! XD
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orginization96 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student General Artist
:3
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Dragon-Eve-Love Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
ohhh man
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
shit is goin' down >w<
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Dragon-Eve-Love Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
><
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ThePancakeCat Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's it!! I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE!!
...I'm watching youu~ >.>
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
<w<
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CookieMonsterDerp Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
>small>I HAVE THE WEIRDEST FEELINGS RIGHT NOW!! :c
Jeff don't die please ;c
OBSERVER YOU BASTARD :C
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Give in to the feels!

Observer is a freaky bastard
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CookieMonsterDerp Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh damn, sorry about that >small> :C
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Dezornoriz Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Ew. Their touching. Anyways~ I hope Jeff doesn't die! But he should of never got her in the first place. I would of left her there.
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah XD That sounds so weird!

BTW, love the icon, Bro
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Dezornoriz Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Thanks Bro.
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
i'm crying so hard!! it hurts.....:iconcryingplz:
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsadfaceplz: Nuu!!!
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
it's so sad i can't help it......i never cried this hard befor.......it only hurts because....


























i love Jeff :iconluvluvplz:
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icontearsofjoyplz: Dun worry! Be happy!
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
i'll try..........but it's hard..........
....this is still the best story ever............
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
TwT Thanks so much
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
no problem
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ashambbelle2 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist
:(
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsadfaceplz:
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ashambbelle2 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist
its so sad...
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsadnessplz:
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ashambbelle2 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist
:(
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SamoftheShire Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, man, the suspense! I swear I'm about to rush in there and save Jeff and Jane myself! But that would screw up your story, so I'ma stay here and just eat goldfish crackers 'til I'm over my nervousness. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol XD I'm good at building suspense
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