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The next few weeks were incredibly peaceful. Liu moved out of the spare room and into Jack's room. Jack was happy. He finally wasn't alone. But, he was still having a hard time. He was always sure that Liu was away any time that he had to take off his mask. But, it was different this time.

Jack walked into his room and sat on his bed. He sighed. Liu and him were to be sent on a mission soon, and he didn't want last time repeated. Jack stood and walked to the mirror that was hanging on the wall. Without a single thought, he took off his mask. He could feel himself twitch, but forced himself still. He just stood there and stared, looking closely at every little cut and mark that he had gained over the years. They were just barely visible on his grey face. He was so distracted, that he didn't notice Liu walking in.

"Jack?" Liu stared, confused. "Jack!" He snapped his fingers. But Jack was completely distracted. Liu walked over to Jack and gave him a slight nudge. He jumped back when Jack suddenly shot around. Liu looked at Jack's face. This was the first time he saw his partner unmasked. Grey skin, pointed teeth, dark brown hair. Jack immediately backed up.

"No...no no no!" He held his head. Jack felt the boiling urge to rip Liu apart. "No! He fell back and crawled away.

"Jack..." Liu walked towards him. Jack stood himself up and backed against the wall.

"Go away! I don't want to hurt you!" Even without eyes, Jack began to tear up. He smacked his head against the wall repeatedly, trying to get the deadly sensation to disappear. "No! No! No!"

"Jack! Stop!" Liu grabbed Jack and tried to stop him from hurting himself.

"No! Go away! I can't control myself without my mask! I'll hurt you!" Jack jumped when Liu placed his hands on his cheeks. Liu smiled.

"You won't hurt me. I know you won't. I trust you, Jack." Liu spoke softly. He put his hands down. "Now, come on. We have a mission to do. I'll meet you downstairs." Liu turned and ran out the door. Jack placed his own hands on his cheeks now. A light blush formed on his face.

"Right....."

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Slender stood outside the mansion. Next to him was Hoodie, Jeff and Masky, who was shaking like crazy.

"Dude." Jeff looked over at the shaking proxy. "If you're still sick, go inside."

"I'm fine.....I'm fine....." Masky remained there. Jeff rolled his eyes and sighed. He smiled once Liu walked out.

"Hey there, bro. Ready to go?" Jeff was going with the two. It was just the three of them, since BEN had business to take care of in the Cyber Dimension. Liu smiled.

"Yep! All set!"

"Good. Where's Jack?"

"He'll be coming out soon. Oh! There he is!" Liu smiled once Jack walked out of the building. Jack froze when Liu ran towards him. "Ready to go?"

"Yeah...." Jack was happy to have his mask on, because his face was still bright red. He looked up. "Jeff's coming?"

"Yeah. He knows the area perfectly, so he'll be guiding us."

"Come on!" Jeff complained. "I wanna get back before BEN does!"

"Hold on, Jeff!" Liu smirked. "Come on, Jack." Liu grabbed Jack's hand and pulled him along. Jack smiled behind his mask, but he felt confused. His chest hurt badly and he felt shaky. The three ran through the Portal.

"Ready?" Jeff grinned.

"Of course!" Liu laughed. Jack nodded.

"Yeah..." Jack knew this feeling, and it shocked him. Jack had fallen for Liu.
Ch. 5!


Liu sees Jack's true self for the first time!

Jack realizes his true feelings!
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scarymarie Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014   Filmographer
Noooooo please update T_T
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Bravestarfx Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
i dont mean to rush but nect chapter?
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Hope-Candy Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
Anymore?
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
As soon as I can write it
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imaginarylife26 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so good! Are you going to update it soon???
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
As soon as possible
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imaginarylife26 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OK thanks. Take your time :)
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FyRose Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Seeeenpaai! *glomp* how's the story coming along? :)
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Is coming slowly ^w^'
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FyRose Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

oh okaaay. :)  I am just too excited expecting the next chapter. ^w^ How many chapters are there going to be? Is the next one you post going to be the last one? Or is there going to be more? I just can't wait!! Sorry if I sound impatient but I am just super excited!! :) ^w^

If you need any ideas, don't hesitate to ask! :)

I can't wait to see what you come up with! :) :) :)

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FyRose Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Awww! I remember this! Please, please ,please finish this, Senpai! This story is too cute, and I think it's amazing, like a kitten born in a field of flowers and double rainbows!  Please, for the sake of closure... please finish it. :)

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                                                                          CreepySugarSweets14

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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I will ^w^ it's just going to take me some time
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FyRose Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Well, I hope you can get it done!  I'm cheering you on. But... just curiousity's sake, do you have a rough estimate on how long until it is done? Or is it going to take a while? But nonetheless, I offer you full encouragement and good luck! Hope you can finish it!

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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Not right now, but it will be done ASAP
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FyRose Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Ok. I hope it will have a happy , cute and maaaaybe lemony ending :)

                                 Good Luck!

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                                         CreepySugarSweets14

P.S If you need any ideas, don't hesitate to ask! :)

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Bravestarfx Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Senpai please finish this!!!
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Don't worry. I will eventually
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Bravestarfx Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Please do I love this story 
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Xmzv Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
I don't wannaaa  Tantrum Emoticon  Fella Tantrum  Dino-mote Roar  Continue the story ;n;
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zelda806 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
why wont u finish it *crys on the floor*
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roci-chan666 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
senpai, please part 6
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Oakwyrm999 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Me: Must. Resist. Urge. To. Squeal.
Dean (OC): Oh boy. Jeff, make her go to sleep NOW! Before she-
Me: *deafening squeal*
Dean: Ow, ow, ow! My ears! Jeff you lazy ass, you're paying for it if I need an ear operation.
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SkyMixUp Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
I can't wait for the next one :la:
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warriorcreepypasta Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist
chapter 6!:D (Big Grin) 
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ArrancarGirl6464 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Me:That's my boy *pats Jack on the back*
Jack: Please stop...
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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ArrancarGirl6464 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:giggle:
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kurokineko96 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thi will no continued?, or this is the end? :C
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PrincessBayonetta101 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
Me and my twin sisters: *yelling* CHAPTER 6! CHAPTER 6! CHAPTER 6! CHAPTER 6!

Brandon: Why are you guys yelling "CHAPTER 6"?

Me: *lets Brandon read all the chapters*

Brandon: *finishes* ...

All of us: CHAPTER 6! CHAPTER 6! CHAPTER 6!
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD Soon, my friends. I promise.

Ducky: Stop making promises you can't keep!

Me: Go back into your corner, Duck!
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PrincessBayonetta101 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
All of us: YAAAAY! *glomps Senpai* :heart:
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Me: Whoa! *laughs*

Ducky: *growls*

Me: :iconredsmirkplz: Jealous, Ducky?
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PrincessBayonetta101 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
Rei: Ducky be jelly. :3

Me: They see Senpai rollin', dey hatin'! XD
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Me: XD

Ducky: d:<
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Psycho-chan13 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
This is so cute~!!! :dummy: Are you going to continue this?! I really hope so. :pray:
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm definitely trying to
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Psycho-chan13 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
Thank Gog. I was getting worried.
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XxXPchychoPandaXxX Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This is awesome!~ I dont remember if I ever faved it or not, soo you ma'am or sir, have made me fall in love with this ship!~ I hope you make more! Also you've inspired me to use one of my head cannons for Liu and Jack!~ I hope you're continuing this.
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CLehrling Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ARRRGH THIS IS AMAZING!!!!! THE FEELS... THE FEELS :|
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ZelinkerTeam Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconiloveitplz: Go. Admit. Jack. Go. Admit. Jack. We Knooooow you waaaaaaaaaaaant tooooooooooo!!!! :iconicameplz:
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starfighter101 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
oh boy, now things are getting good
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
\(>w<)/
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ThePancakeCat Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Amg :iconilavplz:
soo adorabull ^w^ i wouldn't mind some smut here :iconicameplz:
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD Sqwee!!!


=w=
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ThePancakeCat Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
But who would top!?! I mean they are both soo kawaii!!! :iconiloveitplz:
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD True!
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RaquelFOB Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
*W* Awww Liu is very cute with Jack >///<
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know >w<
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APHItaly Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yay me happy
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Senpai12341 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yaaay!
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